1 NA Pareja Nº 1 (1)

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1º NA EXPRESIÓN ORAL Reunión 7, 14 y 21 de marzo de 2012 PAREJA Nº 1: Chico + chica Chico – Monólogo: Getting married (03:00) TAREA: 4 / 5 5 - Producción claramente comprensible y eficaz. Produce un discurso fácilmente comprensible y es muy comunicativo. 4 / 5 - Tarea (muy) adecuada. - Dota al tema de contenido relevante e interesante. - Sitúa correctamente lo que acontece en cada foto y establece un contraste entre ellas: “At the first one there is a couple under the water...”; “… they are getting married … in a aquarium…” The second one … there are two couples getting married … by the civil way, I think at the Mayor’s house…” “… and the third one is the more traditional one … classical one, getting married by the church, with all the dress, all the ceremony …” - Relaciona adecuadamente las fotos con su experiencia de la vida: otras fuentes de información, sus preferencias, su opinión justificada, sus actitudes: “The first one, I think, is the most bizarre one…”; “I’ve heard that one couple got married by Facebook … but I find that way more original…” “The second one is that one that I would chose if I would get married…”; “… it’s the most informal one…” “… and the third one … that’s, I think, the classical one, the beautifulest one, but I think that’s all a parody…”; “I don’t agree with that way of marrying, but I accept it because I’m really tolerant with the religion. Em, my parents, for example, got married by the civil way … but, on the other hand, there’s my uncle…” - El formato, la duración y el registro (neutro) son apropiados. 4 – Coherencia. El discurso está bien estructurado y su forma de expresarse suena muy natural. Utiliza mecanismos para ganar tiempo y encontrar la manera de expresarse (er, I think, I don’t know). LENGUA: 4 4 - Bastante buen control y uso de la lengua propia del nivel. - Aciertos: “... three ways of getting married … under the water… at the Mayor’s house…I don’t agree with that way of marrying…is the most bizarre one…there are really strange manners of getting married … I’ve heard that one couple got…I find that way more original…I don’t think that I’ll get married…it’s 1

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1 NA EXPRESIN ORALReunin 7, 14 y 21 de marzo de 2012PAREJA N 1: Chico + chicaChico Monlogo: Getting married (0:00!"AREA: # $ %% & Prod'ccin claramente com(ren)i*le + e,ica-. Produe un di!ur!o "#i$men%e om&ren!i'$e y e! muy omunia%i(o)# $ % & "area (m'+! adec'ada. * +o%a a$ %ema de on%enido re$e(an%e e in%ere!an%e) * Si%,a orre%amen%e $o -ue aon%ee en ada "o%o y e!%a'$ee un on%ra!%e en%re e$$a!.At thefirst onethereisacoupleunder thewater...; theyaregettingmarriedinaaquariumThe second one there are two couples getting married by the civil way,thin! at the "ayor#s house and the third one is the more traditional one classical one, getting married by the church, with all the dress, all the ceremony * Re$aiona adeuadamen%e $a! "o%o! on !u e/&erienia de $a (ida. o%ra! "uen%e! de in"ormain,!u! &re"erenia!, !u o&inin 0u!%i"iada, !u! a%i%ude!.Thefirst one,thin!, isthemost bi$arreone; #veheardthat onecouplegot marriedby%aceboo! butfind that way more original The second one is that one thatwould chose ifwould get married; it#s the most informalone and the third one that#s,thin!, the classical one, the beautifulest one, butthin! that#s all aparody; don#t agree with that way of marrying, butaccept it because #m really tolerant withthe religion. &m, my parents, for e'ample, got married by the civil way but, on the other hand,there#s my uncle* E$ "orma%o, $a durain y e$ re1i!%ro 2neu%ro3 !on a&ro&iado!)# Coherencia. E$ di!ur!o e!%# 'ien e!%ru%urado y !u "orma de e/&re!ar!e !uena muy na%ura$)4%i$izameani!mo! &ara 1anar %iem&o y enon%rar $a manera de e/&re!ar!e 2er,thin!,don#t !now3)/ENG0A: # # & 1a)tante *'en control + ')o de la leng'a (ro(ia del ni2el.* Aier%o!.... three ways of getting married under the water at the "ayor#s house don#t agree withthat way of marryingis the most bi$arre onethere are really strange manners of getting married#ve heard that one couple got find that way more original don#t thin! that #ll get marriedit#s the most informal onethat#s all a parodyit really doesn#t matter if you get married but accept it because #m really tolerantreally late, but that#s how they did it but, on the other hand,there#s my uncleit was fun* Errore!.atthe first onebythe civil way(the churchthe moretraditional(classicalall the dressisthat one thatwould choose ifwould get marriedthat#s )the* best waythe beautifulest oneby the traditional wayyou lose too much money for that* 5uena &ronuniain en 1enera$, on a$1uno! errore! &un%ua$e!2..."ayor...choose...banquet...3) Su aen%o %iene in"$uenia de$"ran6! 2e!%e un a!&e%o urio!o&ero irre$e(an%e3 &ero e$ ri%mo re!u$%a na%ura$)11 NA EXPRESIN ORALReunin 7, 14 y 21 de marzo de 2012# & 3ariedad en el ')o de la leng'a (ro(io del ni2el.E/i!%e (ariedad de e!%ru%ura! y e$ (oa'u$ario e! a (ee! e/e$en%e2"ayor...bi$arre...parody...tolerant...fun3)# & 1'en ')o de lo) mecani)mo) de cohe)in.4%i$iza orre%amen%e $a! on0unione! 2and, but, because3 y o%ro! meani!mo! de o7e!in 2onthe other hand, after that3) 444444444444444444444444444Chica Monlogo: "5o 5a+) o, )(ending +o'r ,ree time (0:0%!"AREA: 66 & E,icacia com'nicati2a: re7'iere e),'er-o (or (arte del o+ente.*8omuniademanerare$a%i(amen%ee"iazen$a&rimerami%adde!uin%er(enin, en$a-uede!ri'e y om&ara $a! do! a%i(idade! de oio.... can see two people playing chess(riding their bi!esthe mental activity requires a lot of timebecause you have to thin! what to doyou do it outdoors in a land, or you can do it everywhere inaopenspaceyoucanplaychesseverywhereyouwant, but youdon#t move, soismentalactivity La!e1undami%ad, en$a-uee/&one!ue/&erienia&er!ona$ yda!uo&inin, e!amenudoinin%e$i1i'$e &ue! u%i$iza $a mi!ma "orma (er'a$&ara re"erir!e %an%o a$&a!adoomo a$&re!en%e2use to3 y $a! idea! no aa'an de de!arro$$ar!e.... don#t !now how to play chess, sodon#t use to practise a lot this !ind of mental activity.useto do a lot of physical activity.play in a soccer team anduse to play it with my sisterand played rugby three years ago and it was a great e'perience andthin! that physicalactivity isbetter than mental activity because you, you use to* E$ di!ur!o %iene &oa na%ura$idad)6 & "area (oco )ati),actoria $ adec'ada.* E$ on%enido e! re$e(an%e &ero &o're) +e!arro$$a &oo !u! idea!, !iendo a (ee! e!%a!redundan%e! o re&e%i%i(a!)* La durain y e$ re1i!%ro !on a&ro&iado!)6 Coherencia: el di)c'r)o no e)t8 *ien e)tr'ct'rado + el tema (rogre)a con 2acilacione). * E$ de!arro$$o de $a! idea! e! en &oa! oa!ione! &rei!o, a (ee! e! on%radi%orio y a (ee!inone/o) E/i!%en adem#! dema!iada! &au!a!, duda! y %i%u'eo!)4%i$iza"reuen%emen%emeani!mo!&ara1anar%iem&o2er, thin!3aun-ueamenudono$o1raenon%rar $a manera &rei!a de e/&re!ar!e)/ENG0A: &0tili-a con ra-ona*le correccin 'n re(ertorio ling9:)tico de ')o ha*it'al.* Aier%o!....the mental activity requires a lot of time because you have to thin! what to do the one that isphysicalyou can play chess everywhere you want, but you don#t move don#t !now how toplay chess also li!e to ride my bi!epractising )a* physical activity is better than practising* Errore! 2a$1uno! !on reurren%e!3.two different ways to spending the free timethey are doing )a* mental activitythe one that isphysical you should do it outdoors, in a land ( in a open spacedon#tuse to practise a lot this!ind of mental activityif you play one sport, )it* is better for you would recommend everybodyto )do a* physical activityfor me the chess isn#t a sport*Su&ronuniaine!$aramen%eom&ren!i'$e, aun-ueome%eerrore!-ueoa!iona$men%e&ueden a"e%ar a $a omuniain)21 NA EXPRESIN ORALReunin 7, 14 y 21 de marzo de 2012 "iene 'n re(ertorio ling9:)tico )',iciente como (ara de)en2ol2er)e.4%i$iza un re&er%orio de e!%ru%ura! y (oa'u$ario &ro&io de un ni(e$ in"erior y, e/e&iona$men%e,!o're!a$en a$1uno! aier%o! &ro&io! de$ ni(e$ 2...riding their bi!es... the mental activity requires alot of time because you have to thin! what to doeverywhere you wanta great e'periencewould recommend3) 6 &Pre)enta errore) en lo) mecani)mo) de cohe)in.4%i$iza inorre%amen%e $a! on0unione! and, orybecausey on e/e!i(a "reuenia $a &rimerade e$$a!) S$o e! orre%o e$ u!o de $a on0unin so)No e/i!%en o%ro! meani!mo! de o7e!in) 444444444444444444444444444444;i8logo: Ad2erti)ing (0%:00!Chico "AREA: ## Prod'ccin clara + e,ica- en )' ma+or (arte.A$anza $a "ina$idad omunia%i(a e/i1ida y e$ di!ur!o "$uye on 'a!%an%e na%ura$idad)# & Adec'acin: "area adec'ada en )' ma+or (arte.* 8u're %odo! $o! &un%o! de $a on!i1na aun-ue $o! de!arro$$a de manera de!i1ua$ (!)* E$ %i&o de in%er(enin, $a durain y e$ re1i!%ro !on a&ro&iado!, aun-ue a (ee! !u!in%er(enione! !e on(ier%en en mini mon$o1o!) * Iniiamuyorre%amen%e$aon(er!ain2a&e!ar de-ue%iene-uere&e%ir$ade'idoa!uner(io!i!mo3 y $a man%iene de manera 'a!%an%e na%ura$)* En 1enera$ u!a e"iazmen%e $o! %urno! de &a$a'ra, y reaiona y on%ri'uye de manera adeuadaa$ de!arro$$o de $a on(er!ain 2e!&eia$men%e en $a !e1unda mi%ad de $a mi!ma3)# Coherencia: 1ien e)tr'ct'rado.E$ %ema&ro1re!aon"ai$idad) 4%i$iza'a!%an%eorre%amen%e$o!maradore!di!ur!i(o!y$aen%onain e! 'uena)/ENG0A: ## &1a)tante *'en control+ ')o de la leng'a (ro(ia del ni2el.* Aier%o!....my younger brother saw an advertof+.,adal advertising some new trainers...need thosetrainers to be a better playerhe already has some trainersfamous people li!e +. ,adalthoseadvertiseswhere famous people appearthey see their idoladvertising the product wouldn#tchange that car for anything in the world#m sure he has a really big carhe wouldn#tgo outthere with a car that cost,don#t !now, -.,/// dollarsa bracelet that is called 0ower 1alanceyou can have more balance(fle'ibilityit#s only a hoa'what is cooler and what notyes, that#strueyes, of course* Errore!.what do you thin! about )it*2he can continue with thempeople watches the advertisementmaybe it#s a shit of productthey say themthere are many sport players that they advertisebutby loo!ing comparasions and testsand not depending of the advertise* 5uena &ronuniain y en%onain a&ro&iada)% & 0)o am*icio)o de la leng'a (ro(ia del ni2el.4%i$iza un re&er%orio am&$io y &rei!o de e!%ru%ura! !in%#%ia! y &un%ua$men%e e$ (oa'u$ario e!e/e$en%e 2appear... idol...out there...bracelet...balance...fle'ibility...hoa'...cooler3) 31 NA EXPRESIN ORALReunin 7, 14 y 21 de marzo de 2012# 1a)tante *'en ')o de lo) mecani)mo) de cohe)in.4%i$iza un re&er%orio de"rmu$a! 2-uiz# a$1o re!%rin1ido3 &ara en$azar !u di!ur!o one$de !uom&a9era 2on"irma una o&inin, e/&re!a auerdo3 a!: omo una en%onain muy adeuada a$&ro&!i%o omunia%i(o)Chica "AREA: 6 $ 6 & E,icacia com'nicati2a: re7'iere e),'er-o (or (arte del o+ente.E$ di!ur!o !e de!arro$$a en !u mayor &ar%e de manera im&rei!a y re!u$%a &oo na%ura$)6 $& Adec'acin: "area medianamente )ati),actoria $ adec'ada.* 8u're %odo! $o! &un%o! de $a on!i1na &ero $o! de!arro$$a de manera de!i1ua$. e$ de!arro$$o de!u! idea! e! me0or ; m#! &rei!o en $a !e1unda mi%ad de$ di#$o1o -ue en $a &rimera) (! * E$ %i&o de in%er(enin, $a durain y e$ re1i!%ro !on !u"iien%emen%e a&ro&iado!) (!* @ou$d?3 say to your young brother not )to* buy thesetrainers because they are 2un"ini!7ed3 and not depending of * La&ronuniain e! !u"iien%emen%e orre%a, aun-ue a (ee! a$1una! &a$a'ra! re!u$%aninin%e$i1i'$e!)6 & /imitado re(ertorio ling9:)tico.Adem#! de im&rei!o en !u mayor &ar%e, e$ re&er%orio de e!%ru%ura! !in%#%ia! y (oa'u$ario e!in!u"iien%e)6 &Pre)enta errore) en lo) mecani)mo) de cohe)in.En 1enera$ u%i$iza orre%amen%e $a! on0unione! and y because) E$ u!o de$a on0unin but e!m#! im&rei!o) E/i!%en &un%ua$men%e o%ro! meani!mo! de o7e!in, &ero !on '#!io!)4